05-30-2014, 07:42 PM
Date: 2014-05-29
Time: 0948
Type: Flash, POV
My younger brother and I are fishing in a pond / small lake close to a popular camping area. The canoe that we are sitting in is very old and dilapidated. After a short while, I find myself becoming frustrated at our lack of success and end up falling into the water. Underwater, I look up and see the bottom of our boat along with several strange, rusty hook-like devices protruding from its side. One of the devices on the left resembles a buzz-bait, with an elongated, light-green spinner spinning widely in the water. At that moment, I suddenly have a startling revelation that the reason for our lack of success has been the absence of fish altogether, due to the dissolved contaminants in the water from the nearest factory.
Surfacing, I swim to the nearest wooden dock and look up to see a large, dark-red building in the distance with several smokestacks protruding from the top and spewing dark grey smoke into the air. This angers me greatly.
Time: 0948
Type: Flash, POV
My younger brother and I are fishing in a pond / small lake close to a popular camping area. The canoe that we are sitting in is very old and dilapidated. After a short while, I find myself becoming frustrated at our lack of success and end up falling into the water. Underwater, I look up and see the bottom of our boat along with several strange, rusty hook-like devices protruding from its side. One of the devices on the left resembles a buzz-bait, with an elongated, light-green spinner spinning widely in the water. At that moment, I suddenly have a startling revelation that the reason for our lack of success has been the absence of fish altogether, due to the dissolved contaminants in the water from the nearest factory.
Surfacing, I swim to the nearest wooden dock and look up to see a large, dark-red building in the distance with several smokestacks protruding from the top and spewing dark grey smoke into the air. This angers me greatly.